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Post by ALAYNA MARTEN on Jul 15, 2009 13:26:39 GMT -8
I'VE JUST SEEN A FACE
character name: Alayna Lynnae Marten nicknames: Aly age: 26 gender: Female sexuality: Straight pb: kate beckinsale
THE LONG WINDING ROAD
occupation: shes I guess an inheritance princess but she also works at Augustines Memorial Hospital as a doctor. residence: the Black Diamond Estates been in vegas for how long and why:
Alayna has been in Vegas for about a year. She moved to Vegas from Rome, Italy because she got invited to work at the memorial hospital. Alayna had been allowed to be in medical school from the time she was 16, so at 23 she was asked to apply at many hospitals. But Alayna wanted to get away from her life and so she decided to go to Vegas. Vegas was known to be able to cloud the minds and make people forget their past. So Alayna left her home, sold her villa and all her horses and now she only has a german shepherd and a large estate in Vegas. Though Alayna now decided that she wants a family and a husband.
FULL OF EXCITING STORIES
likes:
- horses
- italian food
- helping people
- working
- spending time with friends
- swimming
- long walks on the beach
- playing with her dog
- spending time with friends
- men
dislikes:
- mushrooms
- idiots
- not being able to help people
- when people die
- being alone
- not know whats going to happen
- strawberry ice cream
- chocolate syrup
- anything kinky
- not having friends.
personality:
- sweet
- compassionate
- determined
- hot tempered
- Protective
- Loving
- motherly
- talkative
- loud
- romantic
- trusting/trust worthy
- hard to please
- hard working
Sweet} Alayna is what some people would call a king hearted person. If she seems someone on the street that needs a hand Alayna will be the first one to turn around and help them. Alayna is very patient when it comes to problems, or children because she knows that those are things that cannot be forced. Alayna is the first one to show you a smile, and will most likely keep that smile throughout the day. Very few things upset Alayna, and it takes a lot to really make her angry. Though sometimes shes known to be shy, there are other times when Alaynas known to let loose and get crazy. Where she used to live in Rome Alayna helped out with the children and the injured at the Roman Hospital. She would read to them and talk to them when no one else would give them the time of day.
Compassionate} Alayna is what many would call a great lover. She will not commit to a person unless she has true feelings for them. Alayna will bring everything she can into a relationship because she is always afraid of loosing the ones she cares about. When Alayna cares about something she will give it all shes got. But because of her issues with love in the past Alayna does tend to keep her heart under wraps until she is sure you deserve it. But when you have Alaynas heart you arent going to loose it very easily. Alayna will through herself into hell for something she cares about, and doesnt really care where it takes her. Alayna will be the one who will be there for you, talk to you when you need it, give you hugs and kisses, and make love to you like youve never had it before. Shes just an overall amazing lover.
Protective} Because Alayna is so scared of loosing people she loves Alayna can be WAY overprotective. She is the first one to tell you that she does not like a certain situation. If one of her friends are in trouble Alayna is the one to jump in her truck and come running. If anyone really needs Alayna she is there. Alayna does tend to take situations a little worse than they actually are and blow the cap even when she doesnt really need to. Alayna will end up being the great mother because she is so protective of those around her. Alayna will be the first one to step in and lend a hand, and if she sees someone in trouble thats where shell be. Her horses and her dog is also another example. If someone is too rough on them Alayna will step in immediately and put that person in their place.
Hot Tempered} Being Italian Alayna has that typical temper. Normally Alayna is good at keeping it under wraps and under control but if youre around her when she has a mood swing you might want to watch out. Alayna knows how to fight and defend herself, so even if you tick her off just a little bit Alayna will kick your butt. Very few things tick Alayna off as easily as if you abuse her horses, or her friends. Once you get on her bad side youll never go back. Once youve lost Alaynas trust, her pride and her anger will not let you have it back. Alayna tries to keep her temper under control but sometimes it just has to come out. Typical Italian.
fears:
Living Alone Forever:
Alayna's biggest fear is to live her life alone. Alayna wants to have the family that she once had, something that she remembers most. Alayna wants the happy family, with the wife, husband and children. Alayna fears that she will never have that and that she will always live alone. Alaynas great dear of living alone comes from the fact that she has lost her family and she knows how hard it is on a child. Alayna wants to be able to share her fears with someone, to make love to one person for the rest of her life. To love someone for the rest of her life. Alayna is just so scared that she will live her life like a crazy old woman with too many cats. She doesnt want to live alone. Alayna wants to find love and someone that will love her back not for her money but just because they want the same thing as Alayna wants.
Past Repeating Itself:
Alayna is TERRIFIED that the Italian mafia will be able to find out where she is. Some nights she stays awake and watches everything just to make sure that no one is there. I guess you could call her paranoid, but after watching her family being murdered by the mafia Alayna believes that its only a matter of time before they come after to her. Alayna doesnt want to have to deal with the Italian mafai anymore. She doesnt want to have to witness the same masacre over and over again. Alayna wants to get her life back and never have to look over her shouldar anymore. But Alayna is so scared that the mafia will find her one day and will hurt anyone thats close to her. Alayna doesnt want that at all.
Not Being Able To Save A Life: Every doctors worst nightmare. Alayna always does the best she can when it comes to saving the people that come before her. But sometimes there are people that cannot be saved. So far everyone that has been brought to her Alayna has been able to save but shes scared for the first time that someone cant be saved. Alayna knows that she will always end up blaming herself for the death even if it was out of her control. Alayna became a doctor to save a life, not help destroy it. Alayna just doesnt like seeing dead boddies.
secrets:
Her Family Was Involved In The Italian Mob:
No one knows that Alaynas father convicted a son of a mafia boss, no one knows that he was killed for it. No one knows that Alaynas mother and the family farm was kill and burned to the ground. Alayna doesnt like talking about any of this because it was so painful for her. Even though she managed to become estranged from her family after her father was killed, it still hurt her badly. Alayna doesnt like to talk about it because it was so painfull. She had lost the people that were closest to her.
Just How Rich She Is:
Alayna believes that people act a lot differently when they know that you have money. So that is not exactly the first thing that Alayna tells somebody when she first meets them. Alayna wants people to like her for her, not for her money. And Alayna has quite a bit of it. The only way you would find out how much money she has is if you go to her estates.
goals:
To Be A Good Doctor:
Alayna wants to be a good doctor that everyone can depend on. Alayna wants to be able to save the lives of everyone around her, and not help them die. Saving people to Alayna sort of makes up for the fact that she was unable to save her parents. Alayna wants to be a good doctor because if she is then that means that she is good at saving peoples lives.
To Have A Family:
Alayna wants to have a family of her own that she can depend on. Since her own family is gone she just wants to have someone she can love and they love her in return. Alayna wants to have kids and be a good mother, but most of all she wants to find her one true love. It will help her fill the huge estates that seems so empty with no one there.
To Renew Her Family Business of Breeding Horses:
Alayna wants to continue the family business of breeding Andalusian horses. Alayna has grown up with horses and she wants her kids to grow up around the same thing. Though it may be a very long time if not at all if she ever got around to doing it. Alayna loves horses and hipes that she will be able to fullfill this goal someday.
WHEN I GET HOME
family: mother and father both deceased history:
this is recycled just so you know so some of it may not fit. General idea is still the same.
Alayna was born into a very rich and privaledged family. Though they did not let it get to their heads. Alaynas mother, Cora, was a Andalusian horse breeder and a VERY kind woman. Alaynas father, Seth, was a very accomplished lawyer even though he was more stern than Cora he was still a very good man. At first they lived in Tuscany, Italy. That was where Alayna was born and they were very successful in Tuscany. They had a nice estate with a simple house that Seth had built himself, with barns for the horses and dog houses for the dogs that Cora also bred. For about five years Tuscany was all she knew. The berry trees, the peach trees, the harvest festival, the flag throwing show. Tuscany was the perfect place to raise a child , until tragedy struck the family. The worst thing imagineable to tear the family apart happened and Alayna thought she would never be the same.
One night her father had to fly to Paris to do a very big case. Apparently a gang murderer was on trial and wanted Seth as his lawyer. Alayna growing up was always the daddys girl and the tom boy, so every night Seth would call not only to talk to his wife for hours each night but to also talk to his daughter. One night he didnt call. Seth was the all round family man, so when he didnt call they knew something was wrong. After two days Cora would be up all night crying and Alayna would disapear with her stallion for hours just roaming the roads hoping that she would find her father coming home. After about a week they finally got a phone call. Seth has lost the case and the authorities assumed that some gang members of the crew that Seth was defending killed him. They found his body in an ally way with gunshot wounds. The only truly sad thing was that he had his phone out, and his home phone number was the one he was dialing. Seth had been trying to call and yet they had killed him before he could.
After that Cora's heart practically died. She became less of a mother and left her duties as a breeder. At twelve Alayna was the only one keeping both the family business up and keeping her family together. After about a month Cora finally decided that she wanted them to move, taking the horses, the dogs the money, everything. Seth's life insurance only made them even more richer than they were before so the travel there was no problem. Cora wanted to go to Rome. It was slightly different from the lush green Tuscany but Alayna eventually got used to it. Still though her mother drinks...and started smoking. Alayna was finding no love at home, no love anywhere else. It seemed like everyone on the planet knew about how Seth died and would make fun of Alayna and taunt her about her father. That was when Alayna began fighting, she learned to box not only to defend herself but to kick anyones butt who decided to make fun of her father. She loved him too much to let anyone tear apart her memory of him.
At 16 Alayna met Shane. He seemed like the most perfect person in the world, and it didnt take Alayna long to fall in love with him. They dated for two years, but the only reason they lasted that long was because Alayna wouldnt have sex with him. She knew that if she had sex with him than he would leave her, and over time Alayna had grown to love him too much to let him go. That was when all hell broke loose. Shane became extremelly abusive and overly protective. It was like he wanted only sex from her and he would do whatever it took to make sure she only did it with him. Alayna became scared but there was really nothing she could do. Eventually he did rape Alayna, and that alone tore her spirit apart. She was beaten nearly to death and the one person she thought would help her wouldnt even get off her bed to help her own daughter. After that Alayna never spoke to her mother again. It tore apart the family that had once been so great.
When Alayna turned 20 she returned to her home. Only to find that her mother had commited suicide. This was by far the hardest thing for her to do. Her mother left Rose Hill Farm to Alayna, but Alayna just could not bring herself to take it. After everything she had been through with her own family she just didnt want to deal with it anymore. There was nothing to hold her back any longer and so she wanted her own life. Taking one stallion, Navarano, and ten of the farms best mares Alayna moved to Forks, Washington. It was a small town where no body would knot who she was. No one would know how her family died, how her father was killed by mafia. No one would know who she really was. That was what Alayna wanted. That was what she needed. So now Alayna lives in a small house on a lot of farmland on the outskirts of Forks. Work is being done to build the necessary stables and things for the horses but the house is a small rather compared to her manor in Italy. Now all Alayna wants to be free, to have her own life.
pets: rambo, black german shepherd, male, trained like a police dog, goes everywhere with alayna!
FROM US TO YOU
ooc name: Ace age: 17 years roleplaying: Over 10 yrs other characters: none how did you hear about us: off the red carpet rebellion roleplay sample:
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Post by LONDON! on Jul 15, 2009 14:11:40 GMT -8
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First of all, a wonderful start to an app! I love Kate Beckinsale so I'm super excited. Before I can accept you, there are a few things I'd like you to fix, in order to make this a star application. Nothing to big, so you're almost ready to be a member on this site! Alright, here we go:
- It's hard for me to believe that at the age of 24, she's already a renowned doctor. I love her personality and the direction you were going with it, so I don't think you should change this. Maybe if you made her a bit older, say 26 or so, it would fit better? This would definitely fit her goal of getting married and starting a family soon.
- Watch for spelling, capitalization, and grammar mistakes. There are a few places in the beginning of your app where you forgot to capitalize, but no biggie! Just read over it and you'll be golden.
- Fears/Goals/Secrets must be a paragraph each.
Other than this, you're totally great! Just fix up these few things and I think you're good to go. I'll accept you right away! Thanks! [/font][/center]
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Post by LONDON! on Jul 15, 2009 14:51:04 GMT -8
accepted!Congratulations! Welcome to Viva Las Vegas. We are proud to have you as your newest member! Now before you start posting, there are just a few things you have to take care of.
Claims are listed under ` paper work so make sure you've claimed your PB and taken care of anything else you must reserve. Also, take a look at the * how to guide if you're struggling to get started, and post a plotpage in the ` relationships board.
If you have any questions, feel free to PM an admin. Again, welcome to the site, and we hope you enjoy!
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